80/20 Copy Critiques
Got copy?
Not sure if it stinks?
Got offers?
But not sure if they'll convert?
After you've been staring at your copy for a long time, it's easy to miss little mistakes... or forget to put stuff in.
You're just too close to it.
That's why you need fresh eyes...
Someone who can come in, tell you what's missing and how to maximize your copy's effectiveness before it hits your audience.
Keep reading to find out how I can help you.
Let's Review Your Copy
We'll focus on the big picture stuff.
I'm going to point out the major needle movers so you can enjoy the BIGGEST results with the LEAST effort.
Stuff like overall structure, social proof, bonuses, and Calls to Action.
Because I'm not trying to make you rewrite everything.
(If I see that your copy needs a LOT of work, I'll let you know and we can talk about a rewrite)
Here are the main types of copy I can help you with:
- Emails
- Sales pages
- Landing pages
This offer is also perfect if you'd like me to help you:
- BEFORE you launch your next offer
- AFTER a recent promotion (so I can plug the holes)
- If you do lots of product launches
How It Works
STEP 1: After you purchase this offer through Gumroad, my assistant will follow-up with you within ONE business day.
You'll get a short intake form so I can understand your situation AND so you can send me your COMPLETED copy (NO DRAFTS).
STEP 2: We'll schedule a call through ScheduleOnce.
STEP 3: I'll review your copy. Mark it up. Add my suggestions, corrections, and feedback.
STEP 4; Our follow-up call will be through DialPad. It'll be recorded in case you want to listen to it later.
Is This Right For You?
Copy critiques are ideal if you're a small online business owner who wants a second set of eyes to make sure you're not missing anything.
If you just want some general feedback on your copy, my Email Kit community might be a better fit (there are dozens of copywriters at different experience levels who can give you some tips).
If you're a freelance copywriter and you're a beginner, Email Kit will also be a better option for you.
But first, let me tell you a little about myself...
Hi. I’m Dennis Demori.
I've been an Email Marketer & Solopreneur since 2017, written 3 books, and run a small, exclusive membership community for solopreneurs.
Over the past 5 years, I’ve worked with 7- and 8-figure brands like Legion Athletics, Spy & Survival and Agora affiliates.
I've also worked with clients like Alex Berman, Chase Dimond and Ed Latimore.
And I've helped my clients sell everything under the sun, including workout programs, music courses, financial newsletters, high-ticket offers and nuclear devices (kidding on that last one).
How Much Does This Cost?
My upfront fee ranges from $1,000-$10,000 upfront and usually includes a performance bonus up to 40% of revenue generated.
But you can hire me right now for a low one-time fee since I'm not doing all the writing and research...
And you can submit up to 20 pages of copy (size 14 font in Google Docs) for me to critique.
As long as you meet the criteria I've shared, the money you make will cover my fee and leave plenty of profit for you to enjoy.
OPTION 2: Buy 4 critiques, get 5th free
This means you'll get 5 total critiques.
But you'll get ONE free.
Total investment: $3,000
That'll save you $750.
OPTION 3: Buy a whole year of critiques upfront for just $4,800.
You'll get ONE critique a month. No rollovers.
NOTE: I also crypto for payment.
Send me a direct message on Twitter (@DennisDemori) if you're interested.
Here's What One Client Had To Say About My Critiques
"Man, I need to study under you.
I'm a good writer, but you can write copy like a king"
—Ed Latimore
Author, Competitive Chess Player, Former Heavyweight Pro Boxer
Is There A Guarantee?
Yes. At the end of our call you'll walk away with a clear, step-by-step action plan.
However, there are NO refunds since I'm investing my time in our call and there's no way to "return" it.
If I believe I can't help you for ANY reason, you'll get a FULL REFUND immediately and we'll cancel our call.
But Don't Wait...
This is an EXTREMELY limited offer.
My schedule is full with clients, students, and product development.
I don't typically offer 1-on-1 consulting outside of my membership community, so I created this offer for those rare instances when I have some downtime.
Most likely, I'll only have one spot open per month.
IF YOU'RE READING THIS PAGE, THAT MEANS THERE'S A SPOT OPEN.
So Here's What Happens Next
1) Click the "I want this!" button at the top of this page
2) Fill out your payment details
3) Once you’re done, you’ll get a confirmation email from Gumroad within minutes.
Important Payment Details
All payment systems are secure.
If you can't complete your purchase for some reason, don’t freak out or give up.
You can send me a DM on Twitter (@DennisDemori) and I’ll help you get squared away.
Dennis Demori
Still Have Questions?
Do you have questions about this offer?
Think it might be a waste of money?
Don't know if it's right for you?
If you have any questions, feel free to send me a Direct Message on Twitter:
@DennisDemori